My first own song inspired by SHM, Guetta, Lmfao...

SztarkSE · Joined: Aug 30, 2011 Posts: 3 Location: Savoie

Here is the link to listen it :
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=104qMB9qhCQ

I've created all the samples by myself, nothing has been taken from an other song.

It's my first track so i need you to tell me what you think about it and what i should do to improve it.
I hope you could help me Smile

Thanks !

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onewayness · Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2011 10:17 am Post subject:

Salut, Sztark!

I think it's a great track for a first effort, and clearly shows the influence of the things you mention (the last two anyway, I don't know SHM).

Maybe it was that I was listening on my phone through little earbuds, but the bassline sounded a bit midrange-y. Maybe try dropping it an octave, or doubling it? Would thicken up the beat a bit.

And the other thing is more of a personal sensitivity for me, but in most cases I prefer to hear artists sing in their native languages, rather than English. I know English is sort of the language of choice for the style you're doing, but give me French any day... Smile

Cheers,
Adam

SztarkSE · Joined: Aug 30, 2011 Posts: 3 Location: Savoie

Enchanté onewayness Wink

Thanks for your opinion, thats what i call a constructive opinion Smile

SHM is for Swedish House Mafia ... damn their name is too long ^^

Is my english does not sound english ? ^^
French language soon in a track, it's in a project !

I try to double a part of the bassline with an octave below and yes its a bit better !

Thanks again Very Happy

onewayness · Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2011 12:57 pm Post subject:

The english definitely 'sounds english', it just sounds a bit... like you're not very comfortable with it I suppose.

I look forward to hearing what comes next!

Cheers,
Adam / onewayness
www.onewayness.com